I chose to write haikus for my katakana project, mostly because I've always been a big fan of haikus and I wanted to see what they were like in their native language. Five are below
がいこくじん
わるかったひと
いまこども
フラワーに
かんたんでした
フラワーに
コンピュータ
とてもすきです
ただいまよ
いいしけん
おもいあめから
ねません
パンやにく
ひるやすみます
ばんごはん
すごい です ね〜
ReplyDeleteI think it really shows that you like haiku because of the moments you captured in the ones you created. The first one about がいこくじん was really interesting, especially that you likened him/them to a mischievous kid. I think it was very fitting analogy.
The flower haiku was the one that really felt like it was in the haiku "feel," how simple it was to match the simplicity of a flower. The computer haiku made me laugh because of the last line. It's cute to picture someone saying ただいまよ to their computer :D
Super enjoyed!
woo, Congrats! you created five haiku~~!
ReplyDeleteコンピュータ haikuは とても おもしるいですね〜すきです！
フラワーhaiku は かんたんです そして かわいいです〜